Wednesday, January 16, 2013

imperfect prose on thursdays: ENCOURAGE

welcome to imperfect prose on thursdays. this week's prompt is ENCOURAGE. today's post is by imperfect team member Elizabeth W. Marshall.





When You Speak


It sounds like a thundering herd.
Running bold and hard, hooves quick, determined.
Heavy purpose in each stride
Off in a deafening cloud of dust,
When it comes, strengthens, builds, restores.

And it feels like a renewing, comes dancing on my shadowed space.
Leans in slow, and breathes a peace on me,
Right before you placed your lips, gentle on my check
And left a tickling sign of love.
You mark me with new hope.

And to my ears it sounds like music, 
Played loud and strong from a symphony,
Each instrument coaxed into holy harmony
At the gentle direction of the maestro’s hands
Calling out the song as it should be.
Note on note blends in perfect chorus
Made strong by each musician
Striking thoughtful, careful chords.

My spirit becomes as this,
When you breathe words of hope into my life.
You strengthen every muscle, tendon, ounce of flesh
Where paralysis wounded, left me faint
The ebony shades are now removed
From my darkened view.
The dingy dull made beautiful
When you lean in love into my life.

Where desperation and fatigue muscle in, unwelcome though they are
And creep up on my weary soul,
Your mercy drips sweet grace on grace
And lets me frame my pain
With a new vision seen through hope.
The weak made strong, the timid bold
All fear is swept away by rivers of your grace.

It smells like soil beneath my calloused feet,
Frail and boney,
Where you dug me deeper in
And packed my roots down tight and safe.
Watered well in love, watered well by you.

And where I shiver, frozen in my doubt,
You thaw me set me free
And loose me from the mire
Permitting me to shine.

Do you know you build a ladder,
A place for me to climb and cling
To find my way with purpose,
Living life extravagantly,
Empowered now
And strengthened.

Wrapped up in the encouragement
The saints have given graciously to me.

(Post by Elizabeth W. Marshall at WynneGraceAppears)

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So speak encouraging words to one another. Build up hope so you’ll all be together in this, no one left out, no one left behind. I know you’re already doing this; just keep on doing it. – 1 Thessalonians 5:11, The Message



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1. link up a post (old or new) that relates to this week's prompt (or to a similar theme)


2. put the 'imperfect prose' button at the bottom of your post, so others can find their way back here (see button code in right-hand column of my blog) 

3. read other's prose, and encourage them!

 so won't you join us, as we "walk each other home"? (ram dass)



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61 comments:

  1. first? me? i'm never first to this place. normally i come amid the masses and find my place in line. there's something beautiful about the silence here, sweet em.

    "And where I shiver, frozen in my doubt,
    You thaw me set me free
    And loose me from the mire
    Permitting me to shine."

    dear elizabeth, you speak GREAT power here. light pours from your words.

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    1. Rachel, there is a sweet silence here, even as the community gathers. This place is precious. I am holding tightly to your kind words, they are encouragement to my spirit. And I am grateful. And as I walk through the words of others here I look forward to lingering with you and your words too. I am surrounded by a gathering of sweet souls. wishing you grace in your day, elizabeth

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  2. Wow. Such powerful verse, so vivid. Encouragement, it is powerful, isn't it?

    I especially like the third stanza, the music of encouragement--a symphony building. Oh, how we need this music!

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    1. Nancy, there is a sweet chorus of souls here at em's place. Such an encouraging group of folks. The music, yes the music of encouragement it sings to my soul too. That makes me happy you found something in that part of the poem, the musical. Privileged to be here today and be doing community alongside you.

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  3. Friendship in God ..there is nothing like it!

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    1. Yes, yes His constant, ever-present, tender spirit among us. It blows winds of encouragement daily and He speaks so gently and lovingly through the saints. I am encouraged by em's place and the writers and artists and women here. It is so nice to meet you. See you next week at IP? Can't wait to see what the prompt will be. wishing you His Grace and friendship today, elizabeth

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  4. "thaw me, set me free"

    a prayer, a cry to Him

    thank you, dear one.

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    1. I know this friend, so well, that thawing of my spirit when it is frozen in fear or pain or discouragement. He sets us free by & with His warmth. That is my prayer too. I pray with you for a thawing and freeing. Thank you for encouraging me on with your "thank you"...that carries such tender weight. I am holding that loosely today. Love being here with you.

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  5. I keep an encouragement file for those discouraging times :)

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    1. Oh I love that. Fabulous idea. You inspire me to start one....I pull from a weakening memory. Having it in a place, written, where I can go and pull from the well of encouraging times and words would be a JOY. Thanks for being here. I am privileged to be here with you. This community is precious and so is em.

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  6. "And where I shiver, frozen in my doubt,
    You thaw me set me free
    And loose me from the mire
    Permitting me to shine."

    Your words? Always an encouragement!

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    1. You my friend are an encourager!! Grateful for that. So often your words sprinkle grace on my day...the timing always perfect. love and grace to you this day.

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    1. Elizabeth, so wonderful to be in this community with you. May you feel the whispers of encouragement from the saints on every hour this day. I am holding on to your kindness even now.

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  8. I think we forget just how precious and necessary encouragement is, especially when it comes to our fellow-strugglers in the faith. I'm so glad you've felt this kind of encouragement and your words drip encouragement to me as well, Emily. I'm so glad you're doing what you're doing!

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    1. I want to remember more, so much more often to speak words of encouragement. You are a gift. I find myself surrounded by a host of walking talking angels within these loving communities of writers. What a glorious thing it is, truly. Love getting to know you better here and elsewhere. May you be showered by grace and drops of encouragement even this day, elizabeth

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  9. Thanks for the link up! I could sure use some encouragement today! :)

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    1. Oh I am glad, Cailey, that the timing seemed particularly sweet for you. This is an encouraging place. I love being here among the writers, artists, and women here. ( and I believe some men too :)) May you be abundantly encouraged hour by hour this day. Thank you for your presence here and your words.

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    2. i agree with elizabeth, cailey. may you know God's everlasting arms wrapping tight around you today. praying for you friend.

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    3. :) Thanks ladies!

      How beautiful on the mountains
      are the feet of those who bring good news,
      who proclaim peace,
      who bring good tidings,
      who proclaim salvation,
      who say to Zion,
      “Your God reigns!”
      Isaiah 52:7

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  10. so it seems to me dear Elizabeth that if you were to have a book with your poetry in it and I owned this book, It would be dogeared with constant reading and underlined and highlighted to within an inch of its life because your words...they speak life to me. and your word choices...goodness, just fill my heart up with joy as I savour each line like a tender morsel of some food that i just cant' get enough of. so many lines i could pull out of her and just ruminate on for hours...maybe even days. so blessed by your encouragement, glad that fellow encouragement got you here as well.

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    1. Oh my, I am blushing...sigh...such kind kind remarks. I love poetry, it helps me breathe and understand and process. So glad you love poetry too. My heart soars at the thought of this bringing you some measure of joy and encouragement. So nice to meet you too. See you again here at em's wonderful community. love and grace, elizabeth

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  11. Wow! It seems there is this strong theme God is setting for 2013. . To encourage our brothers and sisters ever more as the day draws near. Such beautiful prose. Thanks for sharing to help stir us all in the faith, dear Emily.


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    1. Oh how I hope there is encouragement on the rise among the people. Love to you. It's nice to meet you here. I so look forward to reading yours and the other's words of encouragement. I know I am in for a treat.

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  12. Elizabeth...this is beautiful ...especially this....Do you know you build a ladder,
    A place for me to climb and cling
    To find my way with purpose,
    Living life extravagantly,
    Empowered now
    And strengthened.

    Wrapped up in the encouragement
    The saints have given graciously to me.

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    1. Ro I count you among the encouragers in my world. Great walking this out with you, a journey of growth and insights among this community at Em's. Thank you for bolstering my spirits with you oh so kind remarks. Love and grace to you, Elizabeth

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  13. This is just a piece of sheer beauty Elizabeth. Love your creative, heart rending description of encouragement.

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    1. Shelly, humbled by your support and by your gracious comment. Holding on to that and savoring it as grace in my day today. Smiling here. Love to you on this glorious January day in our island home.

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  14. Beautiful - your thundering herd reminded me of a night too many years ago when a herd of horse on the farm next to us ran, and the pounding of the earth reached us - it was a mighty sound!

    Your poem shows the realness of God all around us - " Where you dug me deeper in And packed my roots down tight and safe" - oh, I know that. He's done that - and it's just like that!

    Blessings to you this week!

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    1. Sweet one, I hear so much passion in the overflow of your hearts in your words. I was picturing buffalo when I wrote this but the horse imagery is strong and beautiful. It makes me happy you "get" the image of our feet packed deep, rooted tight and safe. Love to you. And I will look for you among this community again at Em's.

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  15. I knew it was you, precious Elizabeth, before I read beyond 3 lines. I just knew. You are rich with His beauty love and grace. I know what's in the abundance of your heart because of what words flow from it. Love you. :)

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    1. Michele, how sweet that you recognized me early on. Amazing. Love seeing you hear and I hold tight to your words for me and to me. They are gift friend as are you.

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  16. Oh. How this takes my breath away and speaks through every sense to my spirit. Thank you, dear poet.

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    1. Thanking you, Amber. You bless me with your words. It is amazing the strength and the power in our words. You encourage me today. So very much.

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  17. I love the verse! Great prose filled with hope as well...I so love to read others poetry and let it lead me along.

    I have written a post which I hope will be an encouraging addition... I will link it- but I do worry about prompts- I love to come here on Thursdays but not sure if my Thursday writing will always be prompt worthy! Missed last week. ;) Blessings to both of you!

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    1. no worries friend... the prompt is merely meant to be more of a unifying, inspiring presence... link up anyways, even if your post isn't prompted :)

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    2. Oh Dawn, Emily and her place drips grace, oozes it. Yes yes, come always here, link up your voice. Love to you. Its a pleasure to meet you in this space.

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  18. These words are beautiful, I just want to revel in the images and feelings you transmit here for a whie...

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    1. Oh friend, may we all be encouragers one for the other. This place radiates grace. Emily is a wonderful hostess. I hope to see anew, opportunities to accept encouragement and GIVE encouragement. You've encouraged me here.

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  19. I adore every single post and comment here. What an honor to connect on a deep level to such inspiring folks

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    1. I too am loving connecting with everyone in this community. I am inspired by the tapestry of folks gathered round the words. Emily has created and nurtured a precious community. Its a pleasure to meet you.

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  20. I love poetry and this one is just beautiful.

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    1. Oh joy, a lover of poetry. That makes me happy Shannon. Poetry breathes into my soul in a way that sometimes I don't even fully understand. Its wonderful to meet you. See you back at IP next week. Grace on your weekend.

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  21. Perfect words. Not only to encourage, but to inspire.

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    1. Emily's community here is filled to overflowing with encouragement, Privileged to be a part. It is so nice to meet you. May you feel the encouragement of His gentle voice all the days of this week's end.

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  22. "...it feels like a renewing, comes dancing on my shadowed space.
    Leans in slow, and breathes a peace on me..."
    that's what I want. Amen. I've been needing encouragement lately, and this does it for me...
    Peace and good, and thank you for the refreshment.

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    1. Joy to meet you here. Emily has created and nurtures a wonderful community at IP. Hope to see you again in this place. thank you for kind words, holding them tight. Gift, treasure. You encourage.

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  23. Beautiful poem friend. You encourage me greatly. Always. Love you Elizabeth.

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    1. Danelle, I count you among my encouragers. It begins when I see your smile and spreads and grows when my eyes rest on your words. You friend are a treasure. Love your piece about friendship, beautiful beautiful. She is blessed to call YOU friend. wishing you grace on this week's end

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  24. The beauty of speaking encouragement--love this post.

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    1. Yes it is..beautiful. I want to be mindful to do it more often with more people. It helps me to press on and move forward in my life. Its great to meet you Carol here in this very meaningful group of folks. Emily gather round a great group and I am humbled to be here. See you next Thursday? wishing you grace in your journey. Thanks for speaking an encouraging word to me.

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  25. Ok. Oh my goodness, I truly don't where to start. This touches deep heart places, my dear friend. This: "And it feels like a renewing, comes dancing on my shadowed space." And this: "you dug me deeper in and packed my roots down tight and safe. Watered well in love, watered well by you." And I couldn't forget the beauty of this: "Do you know you build a ladder, a place for me to climb and cling." Wow, Elizabeth...what a glorious expression of encouragement. Always, you are this voice to me. Love you so.

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    1. Ashley, I was over at your place reading your piece early. It was so rich I had to absorb it and I will be back later to leave comment love there. You have the gift of encouragement my friend. It is deeply threaded in your spirit and you use it extravagantly and well. I am filled with joy at the fact I am the recipient often of your encouraging words. And here...sigh...I'm buoyed by these gracious words. Glad to be on this journey with you.

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  26. these beauty-words fill me with a longing. to feel encouraged and buoyed in the ways you describe... to be that for others... to hear and see jesus and let other people see him too. lovely.

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    1. This community of Emily's is so filled with grace and encouragement. So glad you are here. And yes, I too want to be that for others, to not miss chances and opportunities to speak into the lives of others who have an ache or a longing. Let's encourage one another to encourage one another :)

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  27. I so wanted to join you all today but it was full of other things. I'm with you in Spirit, Elizabeth and Emily and every other encourager...your words have lifted me!

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    1. Tresta, your voice was missed, but that day full of things for you, I hope it was filled to overflowing with goodness and family. So happy you are with us in Spirit. Your words at your place were beautiful and tender, friend. wishing you grace for the weekend, elizabeth

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  28. How He loves us. Thank you, Dear Elizabeth.

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    1. Yes, yes He does. It is simply glorious wonder. So much grace and love to you this day, friend.

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  29. When He breathes hope into my life...sigh! Beautiful! Thank you.

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  30. 'Where desperation and fatigue muscle in, unwelcome though they are
    And creep up on my weary soul,
    Your mercy drips sweet grace on grace
    And lets me frame my pain
    With a new vision seen through hope.
    The weak made strong, the timid bold
    All fear is swept away by rivers of your grace.'

    This was me last night as a friend encouraged and in the morning I could face the spirit of fear and claim the promise of the spirit of power, love, and self-discipline.
    Thank you for the beautiful words.

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speak to me, friend...